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jinglelady4 12-02-2009 04:44 AM

Literal Parkinson's disease Translation
 
Literal Parkinson’s disease Translation


I’m screaming but there is no sound.
My feet have been told to move
Messages get twisted, not passed down
Stiff muscles don’t know what to do.

Like powerlessness of beast in cage
A tangled up Pinocchio
Jeered hunchback of Notre Dame
Wearing “the iron mask’s” facial tomb

The “I’m ok, you’re ok” chemical gone
So many reasons to give up
Vulnerable to end up - a pawn
With overwhelmed family, lost love

These losses real & bravely faced
our numbers increase, how many? not sure
Our time left unknown,
Together we MUST find a cure!

jinglelady4 12-03-2009 06:28 PM

sorry, revision
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by jingle belle (Post 595605)
Literal Parkinson’s disease Translation


I’m screaming but there is no sound.
My feet have been told to move
Messages get twisted, not passed down
Stiff muscles don’t know what to do.

Like powerlessness of beast in cage
A tangled up Pinocchio
Jeered hunchback of Notre Dame
Wearing “the iron mask’s” facial tomb

The “I’m ok, you’re ok” chemical gone
So many reasons to give up
Vulnerable to end up - a pawn
With overwhelmed family, lost love

These losses real & bravely faced
Countless, stories yet - unheard
Cry out, send help to fight, don't wait!
Together we MUST find a cure!

&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&

see last verse revised

befuddled2 12-06-2009 06:30 PM

Good expression in the poem. Thank you for sharing.

befuddled2


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