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colombiangirl1

05-21-2007 05:37 PM

Nice Try...

But, no cigar
At least now,
I know, who,
You are
I can't believe
I was wrong
About you
I can't believe
You'd play games
Too
I thought you were
My friend
Well, now then,
It's time for that
To end
Too bad you
Turned out
To be just some creep
Too bad
You took advantage
Of me
When, I was weak
Oh well,
That's okay
I didn't know you
That well, anyway
I suppose
You'll still try
To figure out
Which one
It was
Only he would know
You might as well
Give up...

Justice

05-22-2007 08:24 AM

That was good,being assertive.You should read my poem "Counterfiet",I think you would really like that one.I think I already posted that one on my poetry thread,check it out!;)

Burntmarshmallow

05-24-2007 12:57 PM

Nice one here c-girl. thanks for the up. you are tops!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :hug: :winner_first_h4h: :Rich: luv ya
Peace Peace
BMW...Tina

Burntmarshmallow

05-25-2007 02:43 PM

hey c-girl please come back :hug:
arghh "Mr. guy" :mad: step back please and dont step on anyone while you step back..Thankyou

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