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trebla 03-03-2008 04:45 PM

Happy
 
Hurt
And
Pain
Prepares
You


You've come too far
been through too much
the tears you've cried
Katrinas' rush
the pain you bare
and continue to stand
If you could see me now
I'm clapping my hands(ovation)

Burntmarshmallow 03-03-2008 06:17 PM

:Good-Post:
okay you can just call me a huge fan of your words. I know for sure that your Happy acronym poem is my very very favorite one you have done
(so far) :Heart: :circlelove: :heartthrob:
I am a stickler on verse or poems ,stories having a title... my writing group dislikes this about me but I believe written work is just like a baby/ child and it needs a title or name. so I think,you need to give a name to your beautiful verse. but thats just what i think you can leave it untitled :D
Peace
BMW


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