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jinglelady4 11-13-2008 08:27 PM

Essence
 
ESSENCE

Wasted time
trickles down a crystal-cold mountain stream
Then in joining -
Floats lightly – seems almost to hover
Over the lake’s blue stillness;

Restless, it flits with dragonfly wings
Courts the subtle pine scent
That whispers of a forest banquet,
Sword-heavy tree-tops
Furry squirrel play
And contemplation.

But time isn’t wasted

Thoughts cast adrift
Can be profound
Can echo – ‘cross the world
And in a moment translucent
With suspended God-breath
Whooshhhhh -

Beauty makes
a difference.

befuddled2 11-17-2008 10:58 PM

Nice.

befuddled2

Bob Dawson 12-20-2008 08:31 PM

Beauty makes
a difference.
Oh, now i find more of your poetry
the creators of beauty
are the true revolutionaries
Thank you so much
for saying what you say
you help me a lot

who moi 12-22-2008 04:02 PM

very nice, indeed!! :)

jinglelady4 01-04-2009 02:37 AM

thanks for the comment
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Bob Dawson (Post 431069)
Beauty makes
a difference.
Oh, now i find more of your poetry
the creators of beauty
are the true revolutionaries
Thank you so much
for saying what you say
you help me a lot

did you want to read more of my poetry? I will check back.

jingle

jinglelady4 01-04-2009 02:39 AM

who moi
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by who moi (Post 432142)
very nice, indeed!! :)

thank you for the comment. beautiful picture.

jingle

vini 01-04-2009 06:41 AM

yes please
 
hi jingle

thats a luvly poem ,very restful

post some more if you feel like it

thanks:)

jinglelady4 01-04-2009 10:48 PM

vini
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by vini (Post 438682)
hi jingle

thats a luvly poem ,very restful

post some more if you feel like it

thanks:)

thank you for the comment and your poem was very nice also. I will post another nature poem per your request called sunflowers. hope you like it.

jingle


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