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10-29-2013, 09:21 PM | #41 | ||
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Nice Poem Bram. I hope you have a good night. Take care.
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10-30-2013, 12:18 AM | #42 | |||
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very moving, Bram!
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10-30-2013, 09:28 PM | #43 | ||
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If i were a dog
and you were a flower Ild lift up my leg and give you a shower.. ok its childish but It still makes me smile .................................................. .. ok an original.. Painman2009 c 2013.. The day has come, the days has gone to sleep the night and face another one Time is fast and Time is slow be part of it all or watch it all go So pray for you and pray form me then whats done is done ,and is what will be. >> not one of my best written <<
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10-30-2013, 10:19 PM | #44 | |||
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In the same ... vein ... (heard from a friend in my jr. high school days)
Blood is drippy Blood is red, But without it, You'd be dead! I don't know why it stuck in my head all these years! |
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Brambledog (10-31-2013), RSD ME (10-31-2013) |
10-31-2013, 02:45 AM | #45 | ||
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haha SloRian! Thank for the two little funny ones, made me smile
I liked your original one too, I rather liked it... Bram.
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11-03-2013, 12:20 AM | #46 | |||
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Late Lament
Breathe deep in the gathering gloom Watch lights fade from every room Bedsitter people look back and lament Another day's useless energy's spent Impassioned lovers wrestle as one Lonely man cries for love and has none New mother picks up and suckles her son Senior citizens wish they were young Cold-hearted orb that rules the night Removes the colors from our sight Red is gray and yellow white And we decide which is right And which is an illusion? ~ by Graeme Edge, The Moody Blues
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11-03-2013, 07:05 AM | #47 | ||
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Sorry painman, just realised that I forgot to thank you for your original poem you posted. I really liked it - it takes a lot of skill to fit so much feeling and thought into a short poem, but that was pretty impressive! Keep em coming
Vrae, thanks for yours - It's not one I recognise, always nice to find something new! Take care everyone, and keep writing. I love reading your creations Bram.
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11-04-2013, 01:54 AM | #48 | |||
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Do you feel that way too when you put on makeup? (if you wear makeup)? For me, it's always hard - I've aged at least 20 years these last 6 years since we moved to Arizona, so looking in the mirror is hard in itself - it reminds me of all the awful stuff I've been thru since moving. Also, putting on makeup symbolizes getting up out of bed (where you can at least groan in peace) and starting to force your body to do things that it doesn't want to do but most everyone else can do with ease. I really DO feel like I'm painting a corpse, but my daughter likes it, so I do it. I was worried the "poem" was pretty dark, plus I've never written poetry since I was forced to in school but it just kind of came out as I sat down and started typing, and one thing that's so helpful here is that people understand the dark stuff.
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11-04-2013, 04:19 AM | #49 | ||
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I wrote a bit of poetry in my late teens and very early twenties, but not since then. I've been writing a novel for a few years tho, and although mostly positive and hopeful, bits of that are dark. I'm a firm believer in getting the dark stuff out of your head - I used to write stuff down and then burn the paper. Kind of symbolic and healing. I like putting it in poetry though, as it requires more concentration and creativity too, so it's not just a dark emptying process but also the birth of something too. Even if that something isn't quite what you hoped by the end!! Today I keep dropping things and having to bend down to pick them up. I can no longer do that quietly! Oh the joys! Some days I feel about a hundred, others only about sixty Take care everyone and have a good day if you can. Bram.
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11-04-2013, 06:07 PM | #50 | ||
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I Want To Live
By RSD RENEE I want to live I want to try But when pain strikes I want to cry It hurts so bad Why does it so I wish I wish The pain would go I wish I wish I'd feel okay And that good health Was here to stay But here pain stays Right here with me I wish I wish That it would see I want to live I want to try So go away And say bye bye |
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