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Old 11-11-2013, 04:38 PM #71
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I was thinking as I read it that it felt more like a song! That's really good, definitely getting that feeling of the repetitive nature of the pain, and the last line sums it all up... So many thoughts in there that are right on the money. Keep writing! I don't know if it's possible to upload a soundfile lol, but I'd like to hear it sometime.

Take care and I hope you have a good day today.

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Hi thanks for reading it I dont have a song file for it i play guitar not sing trust me if i did u would leave and i can never seem to find the right chords for it so
its just as it is. I really like you poems too and i think you should right a book
of poems. they would help alot of people i believe.

Rock on Peace out
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Old 11-13-2013, 02:25 AM #72
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Music... for me it's angry music and how I feel about this damn disease. Thanks for letting me share. If you care to hear it, here's a link. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=znH7lx2d3kM

Beth Hart - Skin

She combs her hair & cleans her face
Closes the door & kneels to pray
It don't matter that she's alone
beast or dragons she's going home
If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within My skin

She found today
So hard to say
I sweat the sheets
too tired to play
& it don't matter
cause I'm still alive
Beast or Dragons
won't make me hide
make me hide, make me hide,

If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within, blisters within My skin

Another way
I just cant find the words to say
Cold where I lay
it's cold where I lay
bones cracked to clay
a killer's in the way
and hot is my shame
Fire pulls my veins
For never is my name
Forever in my shame
holy come heal me
solely, delivery delivery

If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within...

If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within, blisters within my skin
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Old 11-13-2013, 05:07 AM #73
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Music... for me it's angry music and how I feel about this damn disease. Thanks for letting me share. If you care to hear it, here's a link. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=znH7lx2d3kM

Beth Hart - Skin

She combs her hair & cleans her face
Closes the door & kneels to pray
It don't matter that she's alone
beast or dragons she's going home
If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within My skin


She found today
So hard to say
I sweat the sheets
too tired to play
& it don't matter
cause I'm still alive
Beast or Dragons
won't make me hide
make me hide, make me hide,

If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within, blisters within My skin

Another way
I just cant find the words to say
Cold where I lay
it's cold where I lay
bones cracked to clay
a killer's in the way
and hot is my shame
Fire pulls my veins
For never is my name
Forever in my shame
holy come heal me
solely, delivery delivery

If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within...

If I lay me down
bow my head unto the ground
Would you heal my skin
& these blisters within, blisters within my skin
First time i have Heard Beth Hart and i have to say i like her
really soulful blues/Rock I am a fan

Thanks Vrae

Rock on Peace out Mike NZ
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First time i have Heard Beth Hart and i have to say i like her
really soulful blues/Rock I am a fan

Thanks Vrae

Rock on Peace out Mike NZ
So glad that you enjoyed her. She is one of my favorite artists, and has been for about ten years now. Her record company has had her planted in Europe and I have yet to see her live. BUT! I am going to see a cat tonight who's collection of work is just as steller. His name is Marc Broussard and he's from the bayous of Louisiana. Check him out if you get a chance.

Have a great day you guys! x
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So glad that you enjoyed her. She is one of my favorite artists, and has been for about ten years now. Her record company has had her planted in Europe and I have yet to see her live. BUT! I am going to see a cat tonight who's collection of work is just as steller. His name is Marc Broussard and he's from the bayous of Louisiana. Check him out if you get a chance.

Have a great day you guys! x
That Marc Broussard rocks i like that Home song i just watched
on youtube he's a cool cat love his guitar riffs awesome Vrae.
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This is not poetry - just silly thinking or REALLY DARK Humor!

I feel like RSD/CRPS is like some one has a"voodoo doll" of me that they torture. I mean the random types of aches & pains come out of nowhere like that.

Then for treatment? Let's throw the doll in different chemicals and see what happens?
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I'm giving that a dark LOL AzDi.....

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ANGER, SADNESS PAIN

LOST INSIDE A STORM OF FIERY RAIN

MADDENED ACHING STRIPPED TO THE BONE

SCREAMING TO SEE

FAILING MY DREAMS

CRYING AND TORN FROM AN ICY FLAME

NO ONE CAN SEE

NOTHING LEFT TO DREAM

FLAILING FALLING LOST IN MY PAIN


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Songbird, that's powerful, raw stuff - very dark, but excellent writing. Wow.

Take care of yourself and I hope you sleep ok. Let's all hope for less pain tomorrow....

Bram.
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AzDi that's powerful, raw stuff - very dark, but excellent writing. Wow.

Take care of yourself and I hope you sleep ok. Let's all hope for less pain tomorrow....

Bram.
I think you meant Songbird but thanks lol
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