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Originally Posted by Brambledog
Hi 
I was thinking as I read it that it felt more like a song! That's really good, definitely getting that feeling of the repetitive nature of the pain, and the last line sums it all up... So many thoughts in there that are right on the money. Keep writing! I don't know if it's possible to upload a soundfile lol, but I'd like to hear it sometime.
Take care and I hope you have a good day today.
Bram. |
Hi thanks for reading it I dont have a song file for it i play guitar not sing trust me if i did u would leave and i can never seem to find the right chords for it so
its just as it is. I really like you poems too and i think you should right a book
of poems. they would help alot of people i believe.
Rock on Peace out
11-11-2013, 04:38 PM
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