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In Remembrance
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Iowa
Posts: 613
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In Remembrance
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Iowa
Posts: 613
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There were great words and ideas in that poem, BMW
Cool Down
I wrote the letter hurredly
wanting to get my feelings out
Frustration, Defensive, and Blame
All true feelings, but so intense
Luckily, knowing how dangerous E-mail can be...
I printed it off and sat with it awhile
Cooled down a lot and rewrote my words
Now a kindler, gentler version can be sent
But will it bring the desired effect
Hands reaching inside his heart
To wring out empathy for me and my story
Will it bring about a new start
Maybe I shouldn't have cooled down
And just left my feelings presented raw
would it have hurt or would it have helped
Maybe time will tell
Next Tag: Cool Down (because I have a feeling it was supposed to be about cooling down from the summer heat. smile)
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