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06-28-2009, 05:12 PM
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In Remembrance
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There were great words and ideas in that poem, BMW
Cool Down I wrote the letter hurredly wanting to get my feelings out Frustration, Defensive, and Blame All true feelings, but so intense Luckily, knowing how dangerous E-mail can be... I printed it off and sat with it awhile Cooled down a lot and rewrote my words Now a kindler, gentler version can be sent But will it bring the desired effect Hands reaching inside his heart To wring out empathy for me and my story Will it bring about a new start Maybe I shouldn't have cooled down And just left my feelings presented raw would it have hurt or would it have helped Maybe time will tell Next Tag: Cool Down (because I have a feeling it was supposed to be about cooling down from the summer heat. smile)
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