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Old 10-25-2009, 04:50 PM #1
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Colorful leaves everywhere
on the ground or,
up in the trees,
hoping against hope
to stay
come rain or high winds.

The trees need a rest -
shutting down -
dropping, one by one,
gold, red, yellow leaves.
Retreating into the trunk and limbs
to survive the winter.


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Old 10-26-2009, 06:28 AM #2
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It's ok
but maybe not.

Pipes can leak
and that's a good thing.

Our clocks turn back
is it supper time?
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Drip, drip, drip
that is not a good thing

Trip, trip, trip
and here comes the fall!

Tic, tic, tic
supper time will wait

Tap, tap, tap
Methinks I saw a bat

Vroom..vrom ...vrom
That was a witch on a broom

Wait, wait, wait
She is going to be late

The Express lane is only for two
But only one witch per broom

The witch is going to be late
for her meeting with her date
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You win! LOL...just kidding
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I win! I win!
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But it is something!
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I wrote a series of haikus to warn people before I cleaned out the refrigerator at work:

Refrigerator Haiku

Verdant furry tufts
Tiny fairy forests there
Primordial soup

Is it cottage cheese
In that carton in the back?
It looks like it now

Fetid and fusty
Neglected and putrefied
Best taste by June 09

Fuzzy little clumps
Of mush that smells. It will
Surely be thrown out

You should have had it
When it was still fresh and new
Out it goes, Today!
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Oh Joan...those are really bad! I never could write a haiku.
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Some of those "worst" poem entries are actually pretty cool.
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