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Old 02-01-2010, 10:45 PM #1
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Default Could you please comment on my water-paint ?
Hey !

could you please help me with suggestions ?? should I put more shadows ??

anything to make it better ?

Thanks !!!
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Hi Blue,

well I think you are very talented!!!! the most I can manage is a stick figure, if I try hard enough. I'm not such a good critic, but yes maybe more shadowing would help, just don't ask me where!!!
I think its brilliant anyway
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Thumbs up no wrong or right
hi looks just fine to me, it has a mood of its own

there is no wrong or right way I feel with art

the ideal is always allusive, for me

thanks for sharing
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Hi BlueMajo ~ I'm a painter, drawer myself and you are TALENTED! I really like the expression on the face. I don't know if I'd add TOO much more shadowiing, but maybe a little. I think I WOULD work on the hair, tho and try to make it look a little more real. But this is really GOOD!

Thanks for showing it to us! God bless. Peace, Lee
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I'm not an artist, but I don't think it needs anything more at all. Nice work!
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This is stunning! Dramatic, hypnotic. The best I've seen of your work, IMO. Wow.
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Thumbs up fantastic painting
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Hey !

could you please help me with suggestions ?? should I put more shadows ??

anything to make it better ?

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Beautiful art. I think it's really well done, the only constructive criticism i can give is to have more contrast between the face and background, but you are clearly a better artist that me. Best of health.

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could you please help me with suggestions ?? should I put more shadows ??

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It seems just right to me, at least as much as I can tell from the thumbprint. Shading/shadows define it, so you know whether they capture what you want to express. How large is the work?
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it's awesome ... are you building a portfolio?? you could display at banks, pharmacies (no kidding - some guy has 5-6 photos at mine!) ... depending on how long it takes you - you can set up at art shows and sketch someone there!! and/or paint ...

you've opened a wonderful world ... keep painting!!! you do marvelous work and detail ... congrats!
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