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Old 03-05-2007, 11:44 PM #1
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When you have lived chained by fears
Every day for many years
So long you've used up all your tears
Then you will know what I do

When it becomes normal to feel alone
Filled with pain like none you've known
Carrying a burden that's overgrown
Then you will know what I do

When even family lets you down
When love and happiness can't be found
And sadness follows you around
Then you will know what I do

So unless you've lived the life I've got
And fought the battles that I've fought
Remember you should judge me not
Until you know what I do
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Old 03-06-2007, 07:30 AM #2
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I LOVE LOVE this verse. and too even if one knows what you do they still should NOT judge! thanks visitor for sharing your verse .
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Well written. I have felt that way. I understand.
I keep coming back to this poem. So powerful.
Peace, and Love,
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Beautiful. I love it. Printed and put on my wall at office.

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What you've written here has touched me so deeply, because, it's exactly me. I'm so glad you wrote that. Thank-you. I'm so glad you're here. Kindred spirits. I can't express how grateful I was to read those words. Your poem truely touched me. Again, thank-you. PLEASE write more. If you have the words. I would LOVE to read them. Thank-you for sharing.

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I want to thank all of you for being so kind in your appraisal of what I wrote. It makes my heart feel warm inside to read what you wrote to me. I wish you all a blessed day, and many more to come...

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I hope you share more of your words with all of us . Your verse touched allot of people. Sharing that is thanks plenty ! Many good warm blessings back to you and yours Visitor.
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Thanks for sharing..
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