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When you have lived chained by fears
Every day for many years So long you've used up all your tears Then you will know what I do When it becomes normal to feel alone Filled with pain like none you've known Carrying a burden that's overgrown Then you will know what I do When even family lets you down When love and happiness can't be found And sadness follows you around Then you will know what I do So unless you've lived the life I've got And fought the battles that I've fought Remember you should judge me not Until you know what I do |
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"Thanks for this!" says: | mistiis (12-07-2008) |
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I LOVE LOVE this verse. and too even if one knows what you do they still should NOT judge! thanks visitor for sharing your verse .
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Well written. I have felt that way. I understand.
I keep coming back to this poem. So powerful. Peace, and Love, -Cgirl- Last edited by colombiangirl1; 03-06-2007 at 04:16 PM. |
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Beautiful. I love it. Printed and put on my wall at office.
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What you've written here has touched me so deeply, because, it's exactly me. I'm so glad you wrote that. Thank-you. I'm so glad you're here. Kindred spirits. I can't express how grateful I was to read those words. Your poem truely touched me. Again, thank-you. PLEASE write more. If you have the words. I would LOVE to read them. Thank-you for sharing.
Peace, and Love, -Cgirl- |
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I want to thank all of you for being so kind in your appraisal of what I wrote. It makes my heart feel warm inside to read what you wrote to me. I wish you all a blessed day, and many more to come...
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