Creative Corner For sharing of poetry, artwork, verse and other creative things.


advertisement
Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 07-19-2007, 10:44 PM #1
Jaime_S's Avatar
Jaime_S Jaime_S is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Bendigo. Victoria. Australia.
Posts: 497
15 yr Member
Jaime_S Jaime_S is offline
Member
Jaime_S's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Bendigo. Victoria. Australia.
Posts: 497
15 yr Member
Default Why

Why

Why is it so hard,
To say what we really feel?
To reveal our dreams,
That never seem quite real.
Why is it so difficult,
To express our secret desire?
To open our hearts,
Let our emotions take us higher.
Why do we stop ourselves,
From reaching out for more?
When we want so much,
We never felt like that before.
Why do we push love away?
Never wanting to get in too deep,
No one wants to get too close,
Never make a promise we can't keep.
Why can't we just let go?
We've been holding back for so long,
Don't want to take any risks,
There's no desire to be strong.
Why can't we break this mould?
This stereotype we've come to be,
What is it we really want?
It's much more than what we can see.
Why does it seem impossible?
To see past the reality of today,
We must look to the future,
Because there has to be a better way.
Why does it have to end,
Why do we stop before it's begun?
We easily admit defeat,
When we know inside we could have won.

{©2005 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
__________________

.


My Poetry Site -
.
Jaime_S is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote

advertisement
Old 07-20-2007, 08:18 PM #2
BlackRoze's Avatar
BlackRoze BlackRoze is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: PA/MARYLAND
Posts: 57
15 yr Member
BlackRoze BlackRoze is offline
Junior Member
BlackRoze's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: PA/MARYLAND
Posts: 57
15 yr Member
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jaime_S View Post
Why

Why is it so hard,
To say what we really feel?
To reveal our dreams,
That never seem quite real.
Why is it so difficult,
To express our secret desire?
To open our hearts,
Let our emotions take us higher.
Why do we stop ourselves,
From reaching out for more?
When we want so much,
We never felt like that before.
Why do we push love away?
Never wanting to get in too deep,
No one wants to get too close,
Never make a promise we can't keep.
Why can't we just let go?
We've been holding back for so long,
Don't want to take any risks,
There's no desire to be strong.
Why can't we break this mould?
This stereotype we've come to be,
What is it we really want?
It's much more than what we can see.
Why does it seem impossible?
To see past the reality of today,
We must look to the future,
Because there has to be a better way.
Why does it have to end,
Why do we stop before it's begun?
We easily admit defeat,
When we know inside we could have won.

{©2005 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
Great work, I know i have had a lot of these same thoughts many times, But as always i kept a lot of them to my self, scared of the ridicule of others.
__________________

.
BlackRoze is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 06:34 AM.

Powered by vBulletin • Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

vBulletin Optimisation provided by vB Optimise v2.7.1 (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2024 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
 

NeuroTalk Forums

Helping support those with neurological and related conditions.

 

The material on this site is for informational purposes only,
and is not a substitute for medical advice, diagnosis or treatment
provided by a qualified health care provider.


Always consult your doctor before trying anything you read here.