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Old 02-22-2008, 08:41 AM #1
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TRUST-BMW
I must state trust is hard,
It has left me bruised and marred.
I lost my trust in humanity
When I was swimming in insanity,
Looking for truth heres a fact,
Was never getting any answers back.
Alone with everyone all around,
REAL trust was hard to be found.
I finally discovered you see,
The only one I can trust is ME.
And with that fact I have found,
True friends that now souround,
My life and comfort me.
I again have trust in humanity.
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looking out the window of my life
everyones asleep even my wife

its cloudy and gray, my flag is blowing to and fro
its a cold look and no foot prints in the new snow

seeing people shuffle off to work
as i sit warm in my house with a smirk

so many things i can see
even out the baren trees

so as i look outside my window this morning
pretty sure the grayness is a warning



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favorite color
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COLOR
Oh my I have to confess
the color of a rainbow is the best.
The different shades in harmony
a comfort that my eyes can see.
Red , blue ,green, yellow gold,
side by side beaming bold .
These brilliant lines up stage the rest,
the color of a rainbow is the best.
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really my favorite color changes with the mood I feel at the time. I have favorite color for cars and favorite color for eyes favorite color for shoes...
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Mexican, Chinese, Italian
These three sound good to me
Lots of recipes to cover
Much for my tummy to see

I love the aromas in the kitchen
Lots of spices simmer
I love the way it melts on my tongue
I love the way it makes me feel done.


{Sorry I haven't been around much lately, it's been a sick household for a couple of weeks }

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THIS MAY MAKE NO SENSE, BUT HERE IT GOES.

SINGER

There~s an image

in my mind,

something beautiful

I keeep seeing,

it`s you becoming

everything you ever

dreamed of being.

You just put a foot

before you,

on the path you

thought of taking

and on the way ahead,

you found the light

of a dream in the making.

Sure a little rain fell

to darken the hour,

but you kept your eyes ahed

and drew on the power

you found within yourself

and in the image you kept seeing

of becoming everything (singer)

you ever dreamed of being.





I am in the church choir now, but hope to be better in music .

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angels in the sky
angels to be our guide

watching over us
without much fuss

to help us when we are down
they seem to always be around

angels are our there for a reason
and protect us through the seasons

protecting our souls
from our sides angels never go



not bad have not had my first cup of coffee so am not quite awake yet

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surfs up
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surfs up ha this one is for me since I am in a beach town... actually the shark bite cap. of the u.s.a. . hang on I am old school and must do in pen and paper first before I finger the key board. just a sec...
a fresh poem...
a Haiku

COPY CAT
I see you
In reaching waves too
Sea me back
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okay this is one I had already written... years ago enjoy...

Grandmother ( 1991)


Show no disrespect to the ocean; treat her dear.

Its Bodies holding all of histories future so near.

All of life she gave from so deep within.

To reap her and to rape her is more then just a sin

Treat her gently for frail now, she is old

Tread oh so lightly respect and behold

NO! Grand Ocean, man should not be so rude and coarse

Upon you their faults and themselves they do force

I can hear your secrets whispering, I can hear you cry…

You can see me looking and you can hear my bottomless sigh.
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