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Old 02-23-2008, 11:48 AM #11
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surfs up ha this one is for me since I am in a beach town... actually the shark bite cap. of the u.s.a. . hang on I am old school and must do in pen and paper first before I finger the key board. just a sec...
a fresh poem...
a Haiku

COPY CAT
I see you
In reaching waves too
Sea me back
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okay this is one I had already written... years ago enjoy...

Grandmother ( 1991)


Show no disrespect to the ocean; treat her dear.

Its Bodies holding all of histories future so near.

All of life she gave from so deep within.

To reap her and to rape her is more then just a sin

Treat her gently for frail now, she is old

Tread oh so lightly respect and behold

NO! Grand Ocean, man should not be so rude and coarse

Upon you their faults and themselves they do force

I can hear your secrets whispering, I can hear you cry…

You can see me looking and you can hear my bottomless sigh.
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this is such fun I love tag poetry !! THANK YOU WEE
alright next tag ... is animals ( your pet or any wild animal you wish) ANYONE CAN JOIN IN WE WELCOME MORE PLAYERS!!!

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