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Old 02-29-2008, 11:26 PM #1
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THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH CITY! BUT I HOPE YOU MAY LIKE IT, I DID IT LAST SUMMER SO I AM CHEATING!!!!!!


As I was walking

down life`s highway

many years ago

I came upon a

sign that read

HEAVENS GROCERY STORE

When I got a little closer

the door swung open wide

and when i came to myself

I was standing inside.

I saw a host of angles.

They were standing everywhere,

One handed me a basket and said

" My child shop with care"

Everything a human needed

was in the grocery store.

And what you could not carry

you could come back for more.

Fist I got some Patience,

Love was in the same row

Further down Understanding,

you need that everywhere you go.

I got a box or two of wisdom,

and faith a bag or two

and Charity of course

I wouldn`t miss the holy ghost,

it was all over the place.

Strength and courgage had to get,

my basket almost full.

But i remebered i needed Grace,

And then i chose salavation

for that was free.

then i started to the counter to pay my bill.

As i went up the aisle i saw prayer and put that in

for i knew when i stepped outside

I would run into sin

peace and joy were alot.

Then i said to the angel

" NOW HOW MUCH DO I OWE YOU"

HE SMILED AND SAID TAKE THEM

"MY CHILD GOD PAID YOUR BILL

A LONG LONG TIME AGO"



TAG..............WHAT EVER
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whatever is not a good reply
sends my nerve to the sky
strangers and kids too
gonna lock em all in a zoo
a person ask's for a reason
not to be treated as a special season
so when i ask a question make sure you never
look at me like deer in headlights and say whatever


jamie i liked that poem on leap year was not an easy subject



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cosmic rays

sorry runnin out of ideas and am watching science channel
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Cosmic Rays huh? hummmm... probly not what you had or have in mind but it is what came to my mind....

SIMPLICITY
Some of me , to ALL of you .

A sail of words billow threw,

I dash above to conceive.

Float then soar, mastering drift.

Surrender me… coaxing lift.

Those grounded may not perceive.

Angles waiting eagerly.

Light wings unveiled willingly.

Give open slow to receive.

Rhythmic riffs dispensary.

Stimulate high sensory,

Energies rise to achieve.

When spirits reach , touching light.

Flocks of angels take to flight.

Giving visions I retrieve.
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P.S.yes Jaime has lots of great word she is sharing that is a fact.
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motocross race
dirt in my face
hitting 4th gear
the crowds a blur
adreline is high
cant see the sky
the faster I go
to end up first in show
the bike is so fast
could not end up in last
so its the last turn
i put on the burn
hitting that last jump
landing with a bump
i woul;d be so loss
without racing motocross



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FAST CARS -BMW-
Melting rubber on the tar,
Going fast in his car.
Passing close on a curve,
Maneuver quick, violent swerve.
Street racing with his friend,
Suddenly crashing end over end.
Ugly wreckage strewn around,
Car and body peppered the ground.
Safety belt was never used,
A simple fact that’s so abused!
Street racing fun? Maybe so...
wish he had buckled up before the “go”.
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Winning

Winning isn’t everything,
It’s how you play the game,
That’s what they tell you,
But it doesn’t feel the same.
Winning isn’t everything,
But it really is the best,
A fantastic feeling,
Being better than the rest.
Winning isn’t everything,
But it can go to your head,
You feel invincible,
You believe what’s being said.
Winning isn’t everything,
But you know it’s not true,
It’s what you strive for,
And it means everything to you!

~Jaime~

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trustuing with all your soul
will u be let down you never know
you take the faithful leap
on a path way too steep
giving your all to that someone
hoping they realize its not for fun
you count and rely on this trust
it goes both ways or you end up in the dust


sorry not up to my liking but i am fighting pnuemonia

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