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Old 05-16-2008, 12:06 AM #1
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SUMMER-BMW-
She said summer just for me
Sunshine hot fantasy
Island hopping serenity
Sunrise colors spilling free
Sandy beach fun and free
Beat the heat is the key
Said the tiny summer spree .
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I guess this is my interpretation of storms. I wrote this last year, so it's not exactly new...


A Storm Raging

There's a storm raging,
In my crazy life,
So disorganized,
Always caught up in trouble and strife.

There's a storm raging,
In my confused mind,
Things get distorted,
And sensibility gets left behind.

There's a storm raging,
In my empty heart,
I feel a deep pain,
As my emotions are torn apart.

There's a storm raging,
In my lonely soul,
So isolated,
My life seems so out of control...

~Jaime~


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I am seeing more people!!!!!!!!

As we grow up, we learn that even the one person that

wasn`t supposed to ever let you down probably will. You

will have your heart broken more than once and

it`s harder every time. You`ll break hearts too, so

remember how it felt when yours was broken. You`ll

cry, because time is passing too fast. So

take many pictures, love alot, and love

like you`ve never been hurt because every

sixty seconds you spend upset is a minute

of happiness you`ll never get back!!!!!


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It's up to me now
Which way to go
Do I stay by myself
It's hard to know
Life isn't simple
Your plans fall away
Depending on others
To Save your Day
I thought as a child
There would always be
Someone close by
On which I could rely
But I see now, I am all alone
As I have been all along...


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I am older now.

Aches and irrutations do not relinquish

to the well earned appiontment

with sleep sweet easily.

My drowsy restless spirit weaves its way

amongst dissolving elusive disappearing shadows of dreams.


Though well fought...

my battle with sleep`s fickle tease is finished.

We were as boxers...

Only one of us would claim the victory.

Circling...cajoling...jabbing and stabbing..

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