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Old 07-07-2008, 07:40 AM #1
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Sometimes they look lovely
But sometimes they are grey
sometimes they make me happy
Often they ruin my day

Usually we have those grey ones here
Mid October through April days
I can't wait till the cumulous ones
Grey clouds leave my mind in a haze

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tag> tree
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A Maples Chat-BMW-
A fallen leaf is nothing more
then a summers wave good bye.
They're covering the little flowers,
and tucking them into bed.
That is what I thought the maples
whispered as I walked amongst them.
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The Palms-BMW-
The palms were clapping together like many hands,
signaling an alert warning of the gray wind.
From inside, I watched the palms wave swaying.
SURE I FELT IT moving in...
A gray cement, clay covering wrap.
A barbed wire fence to trap.
Through the silver spoked bars,
I watched the trees.
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TAG IS---- STARFISH-------
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HELLO BMW!!!!!!

SEAGULLS


Seagulls flying, I know not where,

They sleep when day is done,

I listen to the ocean roar

And watch the sparkling waves

Roll, like diamonds in the sun.


Sand dunes towering neath the sky,

Small starfish every where,

A place to dream and contemplate,

The wonders of our God on high.


nancy

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Printmaking classes

I remember them
those reverse machines
engraving the metal
rolling the ink
putting them through,
both paper and plate
those lovely shells
of my last one
that barely fit in my portfolio


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There once was a girl from Nantucket
She always carried a bucket
She kept chocolate in it
And could stir in a minute
Making fudge pops for to buy then to suck it

ROTFLMAO ..... (but isn't that called something else, not a poem? Is it a
limerick?) I just thought of this, didn't plan on writing it after writing "fudge"

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lOR that is a form of poetry and a poem for sure...you did a great one.
nice job.



Mouth Time-BMW
Use my toothbrush,
I guess I must,
but such a chore,
Ill never adore.
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The Gloves come off
Hands are all sweaty
Just a few more rounds
in the ring with this heavy

Getting tired
Quite Worn down
living with illness turns smile into frown

Another round we go
in this ring of life
making the most of all of the strife

Suddenly, I've won
can't believe my ears
these gloves sure do work
no more tears

TAG: WATER
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