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Old 12-11-2008, 01:07 PM #11
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( I am NOT good at poetry, but can I try?)

I dance to starlights in the night

prancing and dancing with delight...

luminous rays envelope me

sparkling lights my dreams carry

beyond the stars, mysteries abound

other universes around and around...

I'd love to walk upon the rainbow bridge

to gossip amongst the stars without infringe

I open my eyes on earth I stand...

starlights winking

beams holding my hand....

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OK, sucky...LOL

next: "abate"
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