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Old 05-27-2009, 09:19 PM #1
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Drip....drop...drip...drop
What do I hear from raindrops
Falling from the gutter
To the wood below........
A tear

So slow it drops
As life does flow
Until the last drop falls
Upon the hearts one leaves behind

Next tag - thunder (or lightening)
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another nice tag BJ

Thunder-BMW-
Hearing the thunder's booming sound
shaking and bouncing over the ground.
It rattles the windows, breaking silence apart.
Oh never mind it is just my heart.
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Next TAG IS -- THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY
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the city lights
clipping along at a steady pace
feet going, too
almost a race

sounds wail through the night
an eerily comforting sound
something so right
about drama by the pound

makes my problems shrink in comparison
and appear easy to solve
so I love the city lights
cliping along at a steady place


The country has its own hectic schedule
underneath its placcid veneer
cows to feed and horses to water
fields to plow and fences to build

doesn't matter much if you are ready
or even if you really care
The work is there for you to do
And don't you dare to be late!

Each has its own urgency,
Each one is unique with a contagious song,
so wherever you live
Let yourself be swept up in the rhythm
and carried along...

Tag: replenish or renew
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when first they placed me on the shelf
my pages clean and fresh
who knew there'd be a waiting list
a possible best seller.

when I got old, my pages torn
and no one took me down,
not just to read the last page first
Oh, can I please renew?

Tag....chocolate/dandy
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Oh yeah, some of us always knew

Now they know some technical reasons
Why chocolate is good for the heart
Something about flavonoids
And the antioxidant effects

But most of us
Well, women anyway
Always knew that it was good
For our heart …and mind… and soul

Leave tag as chocolate/and dandy-or did you mean candy, Alffe?
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Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker.... Remember that old saying? LOL

I meant dandy but candy is also fine...
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Candy is dandy, but liquor is quicker
If you are trying to soothe your soul

and then there are the conventional ways
Of meditation, prayer, and worship

But one of the best
More than all of the rest
Is a tightly held hand
Or a head on a chest
And the feeling of being together

Tag: chocolate/dandy or passion/passionate
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