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Old 06-14-2008, 11:18 AM #1
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Default Turned into fathers day poem

I wrote this in college. One year the newspaper was printing fathers day poems so I sent it in and they printed it.

Thev'e got it wrong
Those dam shows on the tube
Some movies are just as bad
He serves alot
Not weenies and beans
He does alot
Cleans and fixes
Wouldn't be a family without him

(for the paper I changed "dam" to "darn")
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