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Old 10-01-2008, 08:51 PM #1
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Heart My Life

My Life

Things I have done,
And people I have known,
So much I’ve learnt,
And in many ways I’ve grown.

I’ve made mistakes,
I’ve got a few things wrong,
I’ve been foolish,
And often not very strong.

Things I have said,
Much later I regret,
Misunderstood,
And not easy to forget.

Just the way it is,
Experiences played,
Living my life,
That’s how history is made…

{©2008 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
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Old 10-02-2008, 03:49 AM #2
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gooday Jaime nice poem keep um coming

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the light connects the many stars, and through the web they think as one, like god the universe we learn about our self's, the light and warmth connect us, the distance & darkness keep us apart
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Old 10-17-2008, 06:36 PM #3
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Default Hmmmmm

Wow, I liked it. If it were a mirror, it would be as though I were looking directly at myself.




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My Life

Things I have done,
And people I have known,
So much I’ve learnt,
And in many ways I’ve grown.

I’ve made mistakes,
I’ve got a few things wrong,
I’ve been foolish,
And often not very strong.

Things I have said,
Much later I regret,
Misunderstood,
And not easy to forget.

Just the way it is,
Experiences played,
Living my life,
That’s how history is made…

{©2008 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
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