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Old 11-13-2008, 08:27 PM #1
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ESSENCE

Wasted time
trickles down a crystal-cold mountain stream
Then in joining -
Floats lightly – seems almost to hover
Over the lake’s blue stillness;

Restless, it flits with dragonfly wings
Courts the subtle pine scent
That whispers of a forest banquet,
Sword-heavy tree-tops
Furry squirrel play
And contemplation.

But time isn’t wasted

Thoughts cast adrift
Can be profound
Can echo – ‘cross the world
And in a moment translucent
With suspended God-breath
Whooshhhhh -

Beauty makes
a difference.
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Beauty makes
a difference.
Oh, now i find more of your poetry
the creators of beauty
are the true revolutionaries
Thank you so much
for saying what you say
you help me a lot
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very nice, indeed!!
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Beauty makes
a difference.
Oh, now i find more of your poetry
the creators of beauty
are the true revolutionaries
Thank you so much
for saying what you say
you help me a lot
did you want to read more of my poetry? I will check back.

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very nice, indeed!!
thank you for the comment. beautiful picture.

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hi jingle

thats a luvly poem ,very restful

post some more if you feel like it

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hi jingle

thats a luvly poem ,very restful

post some more if you feel like it

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thank you for the comment and your poem was very nice also. I will post another nature poem per your request called sunflowers. hope you like it.

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