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Old 12-04-2006, 11:56 AM #1
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Default some of my work

Twilight ---Tina- '06

Rolling black

Pitch darkness

Blind isolation, hovering

Covering smothering

Stumbled down

Into the center

Spills reflection

Blue tone hues

Overtaking black

Final light on distant

Horizons, A focal point

To REACH within oneself

In your darkest hours.



GREAT wonder
The words I wrote was a shame to share,
With 98 reads of just peek and stare
No words at all of “ I can relate”
Or” that poem it wasn’t so great”,
No words of any kind given back,
After sharing mine ,makes the lights turn black.
what is the point of sharing i wonder
it was not great great great
i got no replies, no friends that could relate
just showed what i already known
i am the stinky chesse that stands alone
nothing to do but wash away
my poems with all the words i had to say

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