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Great job. Keep us updated.
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Howdy!
This (to me) comes off more as being "in your face" rather than "up front." Unless having a disability is benificial to obtaining your scholarship you might want to tone it down a bit. On the other hand... If the scholarship is based on having a disability, this is an outstanding presentation!
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Thanks everyone!
Dave, that's a real good point. I'm going to take another look at it. This isn't for a disability scholarship, so I do need to think hard about including it. It's within the context of a fairly long essay ... but perhaps taking that phrase about disability out would help? I just don't know. It's for study outside the U.S., and for a school known to strive for inclusion, so I'm so torn. I appreciate your input, all of you. I'll keep you updated!
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Howdy Strawdog!
"Strive for inclusion", eh? If they use the quota system, then a disability is a definate asset. Assets should be emphasized (if not out and out exploited!)
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I think you have excellent writing skills. Since this is just a small part of the essay and disability is not the entire focus, I say go for it. And as far as this comment..
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