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Old 05-19-2007, 05:18 PM #1
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Default All the way there...

You're going to have to
Do more
If you are truely sorry
If you care
At all
You're going to have to
Have an actual
conversation
With me
You're going to
Have to
Make me
Believe...
That you actually
Want to speak
To me
You should know
That I plan
On moving
Far, far away
From here
Too much has
Happened
Not only with
All this
But, the people
In my past
I just can't stay
And, take all this
Blame
I just can't be
Torn-apart
This way
Everyday
I'm going to
Hawaii
I have a plan
And, in 1 year's time
I'll be on that
Flight
I'm leaving this
All behind
I'm starting over
I'm making a new
Life
I'm finally going to
Take care of me
If there is anything
You'd like to say
Tell me now
Before I go away
Before I become so
Complacent
About everything
That I just don't care
Before I get
All the way there...
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Old 05-20-2007, 07:06 AM #2
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Ya know,most of the time,I feel the same way! That was very expressive,and was just how you feel.Isn't writing great! If you go to Hawaii,don't forget to stop by and pick Nico and I up on your way!
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Old 05-20-2007, 01:37 PM #3
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Old 05-21-2007, 05:08 AM #4
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Oh,you're welcome!
I love to write,like you do.And I like sharing my poetry to! It makes you feel good to know that someone is out there listening,and can hear what you've got to say,and understands! Plus Hawaii has lots of BEACHES!!
You just keep doing your thing CGirl,and it will help you feel better about yourself,because writing your thoughts down,regardless of what you do with them,is a great coping skill of getting them out,instead of holing them in,and letting it build up inside of you! And your poems are really sweet and I like reading them,granted I don't always have time for all of them in one day but I'll get through them!
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