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Old 04-21-2008, 03:45 PM #181
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Default Wrote this yesterday...not quite a TAG

{Heartbroken ~GladysD~}

Last summer I lost a piece of myself that will never return the same.

That's OK. I gained something more beautiful in it's place.

Kind of like Nature's Warm Loving Embrace.

Sometimes I miss the thee that was me;

But I realize She was Missing something Too.

Am I better off for it????

You'd better bet you I AM!!!

Roses are red; They smell Red and Blue...

The Candle is Pink;

Just like My Dreams of YOU.




{I noticed we may be missing a TAG...I'd like to toss one in...}

TAG: 'A Moment in Time' {from your life, or whatever...}
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Thank you so much GladysD, i did forget tag.


i do like your poem.
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NOT SURE

I believe in reaching out and touching from

the heart. I beleive that if we touch, a gift

we can impart. I believe that if you cry

your tears are not in vain. And when you

are sad and lonely, others know your

pain. I believe that when we laugh a

sparkle starts to shine. And I just know

that spark will spread from more hearts

than just mine. I believe that hidden in the

quiet of the night, there`s magic moths and

gypsies a fairy and a sprite. I believe that if

you dance the dance of your heart, that

greater happiness will find a brand new way

to start. I believe the gifts you have are there

for you to share And when you give them

from the heart, the whole world knows your

care.


I believe that if you give, even just to one,

that gift will grow in magnitude before the day


is done. I believe that comfort comes from giving part of

me. And if i share with others, there`s more for all to

see. I believe that love is still the greatest gift of all and

when it`s given from the heart then not one of us will

fall.
TAG...... CHILD




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Child

O child of mine you are quite divine
A hug
A Kiss
A Moment in Time
You cry tears, I hold you
You laugh, I smile
You get angry, right back at 'ya
momma's human too, you know?

I love the I love you's
I love the Laughter
I love the light in your eyes....it reminds me of mine.

Hard to believe there are three of thee.
Almost one in the same, yet so very different.
One an artist, a scientist, one happy go-lucky, one stoic as can be

How I Love all Three!!!

My Lights,
My Inspirations,
My Creations!!!



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Question Stars



The stars shine over the earth,

The stars shine over the sea;

The stars have existed for millions of

years,

Millions of years and a day

But God and I shall love and live

When the stars have exploded away.



TAG....... ........ BREEZE ( LIKE WIND IN AIR)

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BREEZE-BMW-
This breeze like wind in the air,
something for which I don’t really care!
It rips at my face with burning claws.
so when I see the branches clapping the applause,
It’s a warning a sign for me alone,
not go out but stay inside my home.
How can something invisible, one cant see or touch,
hold me helpless prisoner and torture so much?
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My Smile Of Determanation-BMW
Grouped together for the camera man
Each in our place following his plan.
Smile he instructs big happy faces,
Closer still closer tighten the embraces.
I need a smile form Halei’s mom,
Wont you Show some teeth come on?
I did a big grin no teeth just with my lips,
Like an actress whose read the scripts.
Don’t ask me to show some teeth,
You can’t see the pain underneath!
Mention not again Mr. Man,
I am doing the very best I can.
The camera will capture my grin,
Not the feeling of pain on my skin..
Sorry no teeth, showing them is not a law,
But living with this pain is certainly a flaw.

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need some tag mates playing by self not as fun. notice I worded that safely .
Tag is first scary movie
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Sorry I haven't been playing lately, I've had horrible vertigo driving me crazy for a while now!
Now, I'm not really into scary movies, so I came up with something from another perspective.


Scary movies aren’t for me,
Scared, I don’t like to be!
But life is often scary,
And stranger than a movie!
Scary movies I can’t see,
They are too scary for me!
But pain is often scary,
And more real than a movie!


~Jaime~

New Tag - Music
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Sorry i have not been on here. but i here . I can`t beleive i can`t

even think of anything and for a person who sings alot and LOVES

music. I`ll try. i`ll be back!!!!

here my music poem i think

Music can be at the beach in the evening

Under the white glowing



Stars. The water comes

Into the shore, hitting rocks as it

Comes in. Then the shinning moon comes out.


What a sight to see, the sun coming down,

the moon rising, and water gliding in. What

a place to be at night is a quiet lovely beach.




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tHIS NOT TAG! HOPE YA LIKE IT!



Forever shifting

Forever changing

These Blue Feelings Keep Rearranging

Like the Ocean

Like the Waves

Like the Sky

on a cloud filled day

Wait i see Light

And i see Dark

Kind of balanced

like a HEART!!!!!!"Tag Game"-lastscan-jpg


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