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Old 05-02-2008, 11:02 PM #191
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Sky Envelope-BMW-
Invisible conversations written with air,
Sealed inside her private horizon.
When the Sun is strong,
middle of the day.
When light’s a pinhead ,
some trillion years away.
Replies arrive signed
"Handle With Care”.
See threw messages transparent to the eye.
Mail is here via ‘ Special delivery”.
A ladybug , a cloud ,
a faint thunder sound,
Answering questions ,
more facts jotted down.
Too much for paper
to keep such affair,
She letters it out,
tuck and sealed in it in an enevlop
She tosses her notes to the skies.
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Tag- your most memorible DANCE- (or dancing)
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Old 05-04-2008, 10:28 PM #192
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Default Trouple

Trouble arrives in measures, and we stack it

up real high, until we`re convinced, we have

no reason to try.

If you feel defeated, you`re absolutely wrong,

for if you follow your dream, you could

never lose for long.

Ignore the minor set-backs that pile up and

trouble you, or you will build a mountain, out

of the stones hurled at you.

The future holds great promise, your destiny

unknown, but God is always helping, and

your never alone.

Soar bravely toward your goal. Let nothing

darken the way. You can change your

tomorrow, if you seek your dream today.

SORRY IT NOT TAG


BUT TAG IS....DANCE

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The Bee Stomping Dance-BMW-
Oh yes I recall not so long ago
Doing a bee stomping dance
I put on such a show.
I ran up the hill being stung
in a fit of flinging and shaking
off bees as theyd come
I made it to the porch and sat
making sure the bees were off me.
then all the sudden under my shirt
a couple bees attacked more stings
jumping up I flung off my top
swiping and stomping in a crazy spin
into the house across the family room
up the hall to the shower I flew
with faces just staring in bewilderment.
I became the creator of
The family bee stomping dance.
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TAG --COMFORT (weather it be comfort food ,music or a hug ... )
TAG YOU ARE IT
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Heart Hug

HUGS



There`s something in a simple hug

that always warms the heart;

It welcomes us back home

and makes it easier to part.

It`s funny how a little hug

makes everyone feel good;

In everplace and language,

It`s always understood.






























































































































































































































































Hugs are meant for anyone

for whome you really care,

From your grandmother to your neighbor,

or a cuddly, soft kitty, and bear!!!!!!!!!

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MISSING: WIIX, GLADYS ...(check your message box gladys), WE(frank),Jaime FRIEND2U JOYCE ..HOPE ALL OF YOU ARE OKAY AND BUSY WITH GOOD THINGS. THINKING OF ALL OF YOU!!!
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Nice poem with rhyme and warmth like it lots!
ha ha you forgot to leave us a tag so I will ....
TAG is in honor of mothers day...
A poem about a mother it dose not have to be your mom just a woman who you feel was,is like a mom it could be about yourself as a mom...
so TAG IS MOM
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Hi, I'm around...often I'm just lurking...not feeling too good right now...just can't write at the moment...

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MISSING: WIIX, GLADYS ...(check your message box gladys), WE(frank),Jaime FRIEND2U JOYCE ..HOPE ALL OF YOU ARE OKAY AND BUSY WITH GOOD THINGS. THINKING OF ALL OF YOU!!!
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Nice poem with rhyme and warmth like it lots!
ha ha you forgot to leave us a tag so I will ....
TAG is in honor of mothers day...
A poem about a mother it dose not have to be your mom just a woman who you feel was,is like a mom it could be about yourself as a mom...
so TAG IS MOM
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A mother is a personwho loves you, a mother

who cares. MOTHERs who listen. MOTHERs who

shares. Days filled with laughter. Days dimmed

with tears. Memories cheRished down through

the years. Joys that grow deeper, Bonds that

are strong. Love ,You can count on a whole

lifetime long!!!!!!!!!!




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TAG............FLOWERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOT THE TAG IN THIS TIME
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I'm here but have writers block and I got Nothin right now, Sorry. Tag is Still "Flowers".
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sorry my head not here at this time. Maybe i`ll try later.




nancy Tag is still flowers
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My Flowers-BMW-
A basket filled with flowers,
For every one of you.
Did I say just one basket?
Well there is quiet a few.
And each flower carries a wish,
To wash away the blue,
To brighten the day,
With a soft colored hue.
Velvety petals of light,
To shine the way threw
A smile from Mother Nature
To hold in gently your hand
To carry along on your way
With a fragrance sweet and grand
A wish to know you’re thought of
In Burntmarshmallow’s land.





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