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Old 06-08-2008, 11:00 PM #271
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need a tag topic ? or did i miss it nana
well then it be my luck to get a free tag and be able to just post anything
I will post my next poetry assignmanet for this month. each got 2 number one number had A place the other number had abstract thing.i.e. living room and then profanity. or mountain then compassion. So yup I pick 5 and 55 and got a funny mix. Was fun tho.



The Living Room Of Profanity -BMW-
A coffee table stained almost black
with a fresh coating of swears and curses
gave a sheen glimmer in the dim light.
Over sized couch and love seat, wrapped
in veils of velvety ***** talk were,
fitted with vulgar soaked cushions.
The rocking chair bucked back n forth,
from crude insults to raunchy verbal rhymes.
Alone I was engaged in chosen assaults by
the high tech, audio obscene video machine.


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TAG - POOL

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It can be a noun
Or a verb
But I've never heard of it
Being an adjective


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It can be a noun
Or a verb
But I've never heard of it
Being an adjective


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I love this photo. Do i dare aske were you got it from???
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quote=Burntmarshmallow;296343]need a tag topic ? or did i miss it nana
well then it be my luck to get a free tag and be able to just post anything
i forgiot to have tag down so thank for doing one
I have been running around trying to get things done before this weather came in. wanted to get that tag in. but here is a short poem.


What do you do when life seems hopeless,

When you`re disappointed, in despair,

When you~ve lost something that held

meaning to you, when tomorrow is uncertain?

You keep trying, hoping, and dreaming anyways,

taking one day, one problem at a time,

knowing that bad luck doesn`t last forever, that

tomorrow your life could turn around. All is not lost.

All is never hopeless. Despair doesn`t last forever, and later we

often find that even our disappointments turned out to be blessings.

Please Don`t Ever Lose HOPE!!!!!


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WALLOP-BMW-
He wouldnt listen
or give me permisson
so I got tired
My mood got fired
I explained my needs
but his caring receeds
then he reached back
and gave me a smack
a wallop to my head
caused my love to go dead.
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They were quite restless
on that sunny July day
So the children went out
they wanted to play

Bill threw the ball
Jim swung the bat
Sue stood on first
starring at Matt

She was older now
didn't like that game
Still she liked the boys
but it wasn't the same

"Lets go for a swim
there's a pool at Todd's"
But really she wanted
to see the boys' bods

The boys jumped in
Sue simply sighed
She wanted them to watch
As she climbed up the slide

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Sweet Cake-BMW-
Oh what fate is there for a cake?
For piece after piece I take,
Till the last crumb stands,
From finger to lips it lands.
The cake is doomed,
Before it is groomed,
In its shiny frosting coat.
I lick my fingers and gloat.
Yummmy that was delicious
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I did the above one before so its old but next one is fresh new for you
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Fate of The Cake-BMW
My appetite craves for sweetness ,
my stomach growls for completeness .
I am a helpless sugar slave,
To the cup cakes I so crave.
Sometimes I make a big giant cake,
So my family can par take.
Other times in small cup size,
That sticks to my butt and fattens my thighs!
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Tag is Jelly

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The tag is Jelly?
Hmmmm, all I could think of was this...

I can’t see my feet,
All because of my belly,
And it doesn’t look good,
When I sit and watch the telly.
Self-consciously,
I try to hide my belly,
But it’s quite difficult,
When it wobbles just like jelly!


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Fruit's good for you,
It's better than cake
It won't make your belly,
wiggle & shake

Have an apple,
Or eat a peach
Put on that suit,
And go to the beach

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I just did a search for Enchanted Pools and this was on the page.
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