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Old 07-04-2008, 01:22 AM #311
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In The Rain

Walking in the rain,
Getting soaked right through,
She missed the last bus,
Nothing else she can do.
Crying in the rain,
Washing away her tears,
She’s alone again,
Drowning in her fears.
Walking in the rain,
Shivering in the fading light,
Still a long way to go,
Let’s hope she makes it home tonight...




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Old 07-04-2008, 05:54 PM #312
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We could see it in the distance,
Smell it, taste it.
We thought we were safe,
But it gobbled up the tall trees
And came down the canyon.
My mother cried later
Because she carried away foolish things
And left the baby pictures behind.
I watched the smoke
From my grandmother's house;
It looked pink to me,
And I thought it was
The pink paint of my bedroom burning,
So finally I cried, too.



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Seizure

When I was a child
they didn't know
So I suffered taunting and teasing

The sarcasm I endured,
made me wonder
and wasn't very pleasing

Soon we knew
it wasn't my fault
What happened was in my brain

I could not truely feel
what was going on
but it caused psychological pain
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...and the tag is??
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Well since there no Tag i get to do anything!!!!!!!!


IF ONLY I KNEW..........

If I knew it would be the last time i`d see you fall asleep,

I would tuck you in more tightly and pray the lord, your soul to keep.


If i knew it would be the last time that i see you walk out the door,

I would give you a hug and kiss and call you back for "just one more."


If i knew it would be the last time I`d hear your voice lifted up in praise

I would videoe tape each section and word, so i could play them back


If i knew it would be the last time, i could spare an extra minute or two

to stop and say " I love you," instead of assuming you would know i do.


If i knew it would be the last time i would be there to share your day,

well, I`m sure you`ll have so many more, so i can let just this one slip away


For surley there`s always tomorrow to make up for an oversight,

And we alway get a second chance to make everything all right.


But just in case I might be wrong, and today is all i get,

I`d like to say how much I love ya, and hope we never forget.


Tomorrow is not promised to anyone, young and old alike,

And today maybe the last chance you get to hold your loved one tight.


So, if you`re waiting for yomorrow, why not do it today?

For if tomorrow never comes, you`ll surely regret the day...


That you didn`t take that extra time for a smile, hug,or kiss

And you were much too busy to grant someone, what could be their last wish.


So hold your loved ones close today, whisper in their ear,

Tell them how much you LOVE them and that you`ll always hold them dear.


Take time to say "I`m sorry," "please forgive me," "thank you," or
it ok"

And if tomorrow never comes, you`ll have no regrets about today.


Nothing is worse than wonder, IF ONLY I HAD KNOW!!!!!!!


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Sometimes they look lovely
But sometimes they are grey
sometimes they make me happy
Often they ruin my day

Usually we have those grey ones here
Mid October through April days
I can't wait till the cumulous ones
Grey clouds leave my mind in a haze

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A Maples Chat-BMW-
A fallen leaf is nothing more
then a summers wave good bye.
They're covering the little flowers,
and tucking them into bed.
That is what I thought the maples
whispered as I walked amongst them.
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The Palms-BMW-
The palms were clapping together like many hands,
signaling an alert warning of the gray wind.
From inside, I watched the palms wave swaying.
SURE I FELT IT moving in...
A gray cement, clay covering wrap.
A barbed wire fence to trap.
Through the silver spoked bars,
I watched the trees.
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HELLO BMW!!!!!!

SEAGULLS


Seagulls flying, I know not where,

They sleep when day is done,

I listen to the ocean roar

And watch the sparkling waves

Roll, like diamonds in the sun.


Sand dunes towering neath the sky,

Small starfish every where,

A place to dream and contemplate,

The wonders of our God on high.


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Printmaking classes

I remember them
those reverse machines
engraving the metal
rolling the ink
putting them through,
both paper and plate
those lovely shells
of my last one
that barely fit in my portfolio


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There once was a girl from Nantucket
She always carried a bucket
She kept chocolate in it
And could stir in a minute
Making fudge pops for to buy then to suck it

ROTFLMAO ..... (but isn't that called something else, not a poem? Is it a
limerick?) I just thought of this, didn't plan on writing it after writing "fudge"

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