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Old 08-01-2008, 12:26 AM #351
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Telephone

Waiting at home alone,
The telephone doesn’t ring at all.
Are you wasting your time?
Just hoping that he will soon call.
Sitting there all day,
Waiting for the telephone to ring,
Will he ever call you?
To him, do you mean anything?
Lying there all night,
Waiting for him to telephone you,
Are you wasting your time?
Somehow you know it’s true…


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I am fianally back, Tank you BMW I missed you all


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BEDROOM


Best
evening walking
down the Beach, and near
roaring water
over the sand, then
over the rocks. The
Moon is Bright as the shinning stars that are out.


A GENTLE SLEEP


Death is but a dream, while life,

Goes on unendingly,

A gentle sleep beyond the pain,

Of a soul`s defenseless grief.


A brief respite from sorrow`s pangs,

This step beyond the veil,

Where loved ones meet and find each other again.


TAG>>>> SLEEP
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I remember when he was young
I'd get to sleep then he'd wake up
I had to do it
stay up most the night
now he's older but so am I
will he come when I need

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She was ready for school today, she wore her favorite dress tied with

a big bow,,,,, Today was parents days and she couldnot wait to go.

Her mommy tried to tll her not to go to school, she should probaly

stay home as the children would not understand why she was by

herself. But she was a brave little girl, who new just what to say.

She told the children her mommy was a nurse and her daddy was

cleaning the house, he could not make it as the prison did not

allow inmates out of jail or into a school.


THIS MADE NO SENSE TO ME. IF SOMEONE ELSE WANT TO TRY BE MY GUEST::::

TAG:::::: JAIL
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She lay there sobbing
He was the one
He shot her man
With that stinkin gun

But they had no proof
At least, he thought
He smiled and told her
"I'll never be caught"

He put on his hat
Then left her place
Wearing that handsome
But mean face

The police came
They went where she lay
He'd forgotten his hat
Left DNA

They took him to jail
What a dirty place
Big deal if he's handsome
We won't see his face


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THE FOUNTAIN-BMW-
Can you meet me by the fountain?
At three before the bell rings?
Can you bring your keys?
And let me drive, Ill carry your books?
I wonder where you are, and what you’d of been…

I will catch you by the fountain during lunch
I will punch you out and kick your butt
And that jacket ya wearing is mine gunkie
Ya hear me gunkie you got that? !!


I will be sitting by the fountain,
Tossing coins one by one.
Each one a shiny piece of hope
A penny for your thoughts,
My thoughts of you are golden coins.

Fountain of our youthful years spring forth,
A fountain of sorts of early memories.
Long past left to solidify Circling threw memory,
Like ripples of coins wish washing wonders
in the fountain. Kerr—plunkkk Ssplupppp
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The little fellas'
flyin' in the air
But you better watch out
I hope you care

Don't bother them
when their by their comb
That honey filled place
they call their home

The queen stays there
guarded by her young
So you better watch out
you might be stung



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rock around the clock set us on fire
opening a whole new youths desire
rock and roll was a new song
as we were told it did not belong
it was an escape, a safe haven
then there was roll over Beethoven
lets not forget good golly miss molly
or the night he left us, buddy holly
there was chubby and the twist
you just had to wiggle it around like this
then there came four lads from across the sea
there music was to set so many rock and roll hearts free
the flower was its power in 67 of that decade
make love not war was a cry that by 69 had begun to fade
rock and roll has come to define many of us in each generation
love, rebels, metal, disco, psychedelic, punk remember that sensation
lets not forget I want to rock and roll all night
yes the music moves me yes rock and roll is alright


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Celebrations

Celebrations will have to wait,
We haven’t even prepared,
Don’t lose sight of the goal,
Our expectations are impaired.

Celebrations are much too soon,
We haven’t seen the end,
Don’t be blinded by it,
It’s not easy to even pretend.

Celebrations are put on hold,
We have so much doubt within,
Don’t get too far ahead,
We feel we don’t deserve to win.

Celebrations are premature,
We haven’t even won yet,
Don’t get carried away,
Failure isn’t easy to forget…



Celebrate

We should celebrate,
But depression has a hold
We make excuses,
We never believe what we’re told.

We should celebrate
But we’re always trying to hide
We seem to be blind,
We don’t really see the good side.

We should celebrate,
But we deny ourselves that right,
Always resisting,
Nothing wonderful about our plight.

We should celebrate,
But we can’t imagine a better day
But we should believe,
Life is so precious in every way!


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